Really, really enjoyed this game. The aesthetic was gorgeous, the battle mechanics were intricate and well thought out, and everything seemed equally well balanced and fair. Character development was on point and there was enough diversity to break up any monotony that might have reared up.
I didn't really find anything wrong with it, honestly. Very little feedback to give regarding improvement, as there didn't seem to be any passability or spelling issues. No crashes that I'm aware of, etc. The writing was your shining star here. This game was absolutely hilarious from the moment it started. I would really have expected a game like this to place higher in the competition, so, very well done there.
I will say, if you are not a fan of strong language, this may not be the game for you. Even still, it was never over the top and completely suited the character and the moment. Nothing but praise for this entry and hope to see it continue after the IGMC. Here is the LP: