Hey!
I played your game last night on stream and had a blast with it. I think by far your game was one of the best games I played on stream. Considering I was reviewing games, I still had to find some sort of critique for it by the end of my play session, but really all of my critiques are minor nitpicks, such as the jump mini game bar always resetting to a very, very slow speed whenever you mess up the jump, and how the jump mini game bar will always speed up, which effectively punishes exploration. But they really are minor nitpicks for a great game!
You can watch my stream here, and you can use the chapters to skip to when I begin playing your game.