Hey there!
First of all, the graphics are amazing, especially in the story segments, but there are still some sprites that don't fit together, like the arrow or some things in the level. I like the idea and concept of the game, but the controls sometimes are buggy and it's really hard to control as a side-scroller, i would enjoy the game more as a platformer that doesn't scroll i think. Anyways, great concept and keep developing this! :D
I hope the feedback helped you a bit, and it would be nice if you could check out our submission too, thank you! :)