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Thanks for the feedback! Sounds like my writing is in the right direction, now. That makes me feel a lot better, because this is what I was worried about the most.

In regards to Makeup deal, yeah I agree. I tweaked it up, because I like how drastically it "beautified" the main character. Maybe I'll tweak it back down to what it was before, and see how people feel about it.

In regards to sexual counters and morale changes, that's what I'm thinking about the most, right now. There's kind of two issues with it right now. The first issue is that when you skip the scene, it goes to the last message. Because of this, I tried to make the last message a summary of the scene, like the main character earned so many credits. Other times, if the main character lost morale, then that is the last message. I think this is good, because that's what the player really needs to know, even if they skipped the scene. However, I'd like to bundle the sexual counter changes (like number of times catcalled +1) to be reported in this last message as well, if possible.

The second and more long term issue is that I'm not really sure what sexual statistics I want to track. I always find them interesting in other games, but I think there's such a thing as too much clutter. If I have the right set of data to track, I think that will also help guide me on what kinds of scenes I want to create, what kind of variety is productive, and what kind of variety is just adding too much complexity. For example, should the game track how many times the main character gave an officer a blowjob? What about how many blowjobs were given on a station, to people who are or are not officers? Do we want to know how many times she spat and how many times she swallowed? What about how many milliliters of cum she spat or swallowed? Or how many milliliters were bukkake'ed on her chest? I don't think all of that should be included, but some definitely should be, and I'm trying to refine that balance, now.

This exercise is also making me think about what kind of language I should use. Do I want to be more prudish and say "Chest Groped: ", or more sleazy, like, "Tits Molested: "? Should I used the same language for her chest, butt and vagina, or make them somewhat different? I drafted a list of things to track and what to call them last night, and then I added them to the code. I like this, because it gives me some helpful limits (or "guardrails") on how I should construct scenes going forward.

Btw, I didn't choose Vagina. I chose "Womanhood Fondled", because I think vagina comes off pretty strong, haha. I also like that "Womanhood Fondled" is differentiated a bit from her chest or butt being molested, which I wrote as "Chest Groped" and "Butt Groped". If I have it implemented by next week, then maybe I should post a screenshot of it and collect some feedback.