I am sorry to hear about your struggles with the current political climate. I am impresed and surprised by a major story rewrite... because I thought the current one was already really good. But more H-scenes are always welcome!
If I had to change anything of the story would just be a dialogue addition: When Darkness goes to the "empty" room to alliviate herself, and then Kazuma asks her what she's doing here and she talks about the horrible things and the gaze of the fat bastard, a little whisper at the end saying something like: And when I pictured you doing that... So that's why she would be excited.
Sorry to bother you with this, I'll patiently wait for the next awesome update.