I think you started to create a good story and I think you should continue like that. I have only one request, if the money system is added in the future updates, please don't break the balance because in some games we earn very little money and the price of what we need to buy is too high. I hope it won't be like this (Sorry for my bad English because my main language is Turkish but I can still understand the story)
Don't worry my friend, there is no plan for adding a money system in the future because I think it doesn't fit with the spirit of the narrative, I want to everyone feel less limited, in my game, you don't have to repeat the same action hundreds of times to get money ( for example). I don't like that on visual novels, we are here for the juicy story. but that's just my opinion my friend, thank you for the feedback!