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 i adore the story posted so far and wow this story got me HOOKED. also the way that mc and li keep dancing around their feelings got me so kjsdjksdks. rory my beloved u deserve the world pls lemme give u a lil kiss on the cheeks <333.  i wish i can rate this game 100/5 but itch.io won't let me </333 anywayss, i can't wait to see how this story goes !

I NEEEED MORE! Writer omg this is like too good i don't feel worthy. BUT i do. MUST.HAVE.STORY!

For real! It feels like something I would have to pay GOOD money for. Lke, atleast £10

Exactly like ARGGGHGUYGDHJ (yk?)

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Sebastian and Liam my BELOVEDS. i am eagerly awaiting the next update! i only recently found this, but i adore your writing. the change from second person to first during the ritual gave me chills!

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I am so excited to see where this is going! I am so hooked! Characters are all exceedingly lovable and the world is quite rich.

the world IS very rich!

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Does this game have an actual ending

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I'm overjoyed that I stuck with the game from the beginning till now.

And dear author, I read it again, and it's just as amazing as before💕. I'm looking forward to the upcoming updates and wish you a wonderful day.

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So I found this game in 2021 but forgot about it after i reached the unfinished part... but I found it again, finally! I had to start from the beginning due to the re-code but it was so fun and nostalgic, I truly love this game! I told myself I would enter this game with an open mind but after all these years I still have a crush on both Liam and Sebastian 😭 I defenitely suggest this game to whomever finds its and I am so excited for the next update! <3 

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happy new yearrr<3

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Just finished and i'm already obsessed. Very good story and super amazing characters, Sebastian and Liam is life.

Truly amazing, is there a possibility or any plans to fully finish and release the game?

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Speaker is still very much in development! I've run into some tricky coding that has delayed the next update longer than I'd like, but it's still actively being worked on

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Still an amazing game, truly amazing. If there's perhaps a discord channel or any way I can see the progress, can I join it?

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you can join the discord server or go to tumblr for updates. Hope it helps!

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just replayed for the second time and its still as captivating as the first time I read it! truly can't wait until it's finished!!

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ough i just finished whats up and im obsessed it's so good!!

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words can't describe how much i love this game

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I cannot wait for another update!!! This game is amazing and I am a SIMP for Liam. 

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every 3 business days i feel the urge to play through this again 

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absolutely phenomenal so far, so excited for more

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me, named aurora, with the nickname rory: perusing the character descriptions

me: 

me: there's not enough room in this town for both of us, kane...

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i'm officially obsessed. it's so good, so funny. i can't stop thinking about iiiiiit

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Soooooo gooooooooooood aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Do saves not work on iPad? :(

They should, a lot of browsers don’t work with twine saves though, try changing that-Chrome usually works well.

ty ✨ 

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SUCH A DREAM OF A GAME HOLY COW I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

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Love this 🥰. This is such an amazing story with interesting characters and an intriguing plot. Truly a hidden jem. 


#LiAndSebbyForLife😘

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Liam is life.

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There's a polyam option with Sebastian and Liam?! MY DREAM! I hope I'm on the right path to having that happen LOL

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YEAHHHH

HEY WAIT I KNOW YOU FROM SOMEWHERE

Waht

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whenever I read this, I only ever imagine the sweet boy as a black labrador. I don't know why, I've never had a black labrador, I just cannot imagine him otherwise

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It's a pretty dead on reference to a "black dog" from a particular anime... but i won't link it and spoil your image 👍

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I'm afraid I don't watch any anime, so any references there would be purely accidental 😅 black dogs are a bit of british folklore that I've always been fond of

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Look into 'the ancient magus bride'.. grrayt and pretty fantasy show of modern day times with the fantasy elements being exclusively European, said Black Dog becomes a main character. 😘 Consider it research?

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Not me wanting to romance Gavin and naming my dog after alcohol

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Clearly, you are waiting for the second game to romance Gavin, anyway hope you're good with kids!

(A game where you play as "The Witness" instead of "The Speaker" you have no relation to the others family except for your relationship with Gavin Cowles obviously.)

that actually sounds beautiful and i want it so bad

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Not Rory letting me live out my dreams of petting coyotes! I love the danger puppies! Him and Wojtek (Black Dog) are feeding me all my dog content needs <3

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OOHOOHOO what a great story!! I need to romance Sebastian right now, but also the other boys, and also find out what the HELL is going on, because I'm obsessed. The magic in this world is so so so amazing even for how little we're taught about it! It just feels REAL! Fantastic work!

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I'm loving this so far. It's very well written and I love how all of the options you choose affect little things. Makes me really feel involved in the world.

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Li Rory and Bas are all under arrest for stealing my heart. 

Petition to add Rory to the poly route

(im only half joking.. gives me an excuse to replay ;) )

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I need more of this IF! Li's route is ❤️❤️❤️. 

I'm looking forward the next chapter! 😍😍😍

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excited to play the rewrite!!! <33

is this phone compatible

yea

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AAAAA I LOVE THE REWRITE! At the very start everything looks so different not only by the background style but also with your writing, because now it feels like the world is more fleshed out and immersive. Especially with the little tidbits about how humans react towards the Old Town. I really love the Codex part cause it feels very immersive and has additional lore that keeps up with everything but doesn't intrude with the main story. I also love how the MC and their twin sister's relationship and dynamic started to really take attention at the very start, and also how customizable MC has become with the pronouns, little facts about them we can influence, and how much accessories we can add on in MC. And the characters! I don't know if anything's changed but in my opinion they felt more alive, which probably means they've been rewritten to be livelier but I can't tell!! Aaaa I really love it and I loved replaying it, never once thought of how boring or redundant it was, I can't wait to see more!!

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OMG I AM SO EXCITED TO PLAY THE REWRITE AHHHHHH 

Waaaaa!! After the rewrite the characters feel more real! And the flow of the story is AMAZING now!! This is a very big improvement! Hehe, I love it >:3

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Even after the rewrite, L and S somehow still manage to have my whole heart. I very much like how immersive this game is, and I continue to wait with bated breath for what comes next! :)

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This has to be my favourite one so far.

Ive played many text based story games, but none have pulled me into the story as much as this one. Its written well, the characters are unique and likeable, the customization is diverse and the choices finally make sense, unlike most other games.

I feel like i am actually able to lose someone or something, i dont think ive ever cared about a fictional sibling like this before. 

The story line is intruiging and exciting, there are no boring breaks where nothing happens. It always leaves you hoping for more and more, to find out just what could happen next. What is happening?  Why is there a curse in the first place? will our sister be alright? is there something deeper, more ominous lurking and waiting for us? why are we told to ´awaken´? When will i see our dog again? These are the questions that have been haunting me the entire day.

While i like that the rom dialogue options are pointed out, i sometimes couldnt choose between choosing them or choosing what i would actually want to do. For example, while we are numb, i really tried to have it stay that way but just couldnt because i felt like i would miss something if i didnt choose the other options. 

Overall i am very intruiged and excited to see what comes next! Amazing work.

the characters are all written out so well. i'll now be waiting for your updates. keep up the good work!

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