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Congrats, Moebius is a cool dude! Could you go into more detail about what would make the textbox more readable for you? Thanks for your feedback :)

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It happens quite a lot in most visual novel, especially if there are a lot of choices, sometimes I need to go back to read the previous sentence, and its awkward to read from below upward.

The multiple choices sometimes merge like in one text box, mostly for a long sentence. Its more like a little nuisance more than anything.

Lastly the color, I am not a fan of white text in bright background. Simple dialogue box like the choices (black text in white) is what I preferred most of the time, if we dont want to get fancy.

But all of this is just my preference, you dont have to pay it too much attention, its still a fun experience, keep up the good work!

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Thanks, this is super helpful for us. We are planning on revisiting the game after the jam, to address at least some of the feedback. We will definitely look into your points :)