You shouldn't be sorry for your game, everyone makes mistakes, even the pros (of course I'm not the pro , and I made more terrible bugs than you, so there is nothing to be ashamed of). I'm just trying to give constructive feedback, and I don't want to hurt your feelings. Now I understand that the first sentence is quite rude, but these are my first impressions of the gameplay of your game.
Im glad to hear that the artstyle is yours, and as I said it is very beautiful.
P.S. Also, check out our game. It isn't so beautiful as your's, and it doesn't really fit the theme, but we worked a lot, and my friend and I want to know the opinions of different people, so don't forget to leave a comment) Oh, and of course I changed the rate after this misunderstanding.