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Amazing job! The opening to this track was soundtrack was super impressive: the staggered entrances of the synth, the birds, and then the piano, made it sound like the track was blossoming open, sucking you into the world of the game. The key change was the next pleasant surprise: the track never felt static or boring, even though it was ambient.

The second track was also beautiful, though the drums did feel a bit out of place in the mix. I do think the initial urgency of the drums fading away into a softer piano melody conveyed the runaway story well (a chase leading into solitude). My advice would be to lean into the drama more! The drums were a good start, but ramp up the intensity with, perhaps, greater dissonance, crescendoing lines, or more rhythmic patterns in other instruments. Again, awesome job-- love the atmospheric vibes!

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i appreciate your hard work in expressing your thoughts on my music! This was the way more detailed than i expected. Thanks!

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Of course! The best thing for a musician is feedback, and you did so many things right I wanted to point them out. You should be proud of this stuff, it was great work!