Yeah, the dialogue is funny or romantic and sweet at times. But it's those times when the MC, Agang, does things that you have no control or and talks like a stalker or rapist that kill the game for me. For example, he is by now is a relationship with Vera. Even if she is into kinky stuff at home, why come to her job and try to expose her breasts? I picked not to do that. And I'm glad there was no demand that I had to that time. But too often there is no option to not do something. And something they even unrealistically make the girls try to bait you or tease you into doing dumb stuff at work or why tutoring. Are we to believe all of them are so thirsty for sex that they throw their careers away. I just don't see that happening with Theo or Vera. Yet once Theo is in a bad situation and covered in cum before a worker walks in and the main character just runs away and she doesn't even clean it up. She just sits there and says it's spilled milk. They even make it clean the worker knows she's lying or thinks she threw up on herself. The point is, there was no option to take the fall and stay to clean her up. You childishly do the deed in her office then she tells you to leave only to get caught anyway? And this is your wife to be? I wanted to stay, and at least fully clean her up or go out and stall the worker coming in. I wanted to save her dignity. But the game wants Theo and all others to just have the illusion of self respect and pride and it's up to the MC to "break them" and turn them into perverts that do as he says. I wish I had known that before playing the game.
Well this is the plot for nearly all erotic game but most of them gives you the option to act otherwise at least. But even then it can be made to work this harem thing without "breaking in" the girls and without them acting like sex slut bitches.
I also didn't like that Theo actually never told the MC what happened in school, that they lost their virginity to each other when he was drunk af in high school. And kept telling the MC that a jerk did it in school, but it was him. At least after their marriage (in the good Theo ending) she should have told him.
Well there was a lot of stuff that didn't make sense. I'm pointing these things out cuz i'm sad because this game would have been so much better with just a little different writing.
In game they say over and over that a chapter 2 segment explains their past in high school. She only doesn't tell him just to likely get people to play thru that chapter.
Ive seen games where you don't break the girls and make them dependent on you. But they weren't really harem games. You can have a harem but it wasn't the focus. Like in Tales from the Void. Or in Once in a Lifetime. Lots of girls like you in both, but they never become shameless sex slaves that live to serve you the second no one is around.