Oh - hey, I meant to update on here but forgot, I made Felix an RO officially!
There will be more about what F did and why in chapter 2 :)
It's okay about the typos, I'm trying to find them all :D
I'm taking a break from writing this week but appreciate your feedback on the options and definitely think they are good suggestions so I'll see if I can work some of those in for when I update.
Thanks so much for giving my demo a go!!