Thanks for your kind reply. I'm taking my time and going along with the story very slowly. Had to smile when it has come up to the first massage scene, with Zack sitting on Bradens back. So funny.. cause with massage my friend got me in these times. I was 16 and felt completely straight. He was 15 and had to persuade me to let it happen. When he had finished.. I was emotionally completely confused for the following days. And from there on, we started to do it again, sometimes many times a week..till we passed the line, that is determined to be passed that way.. ;-)
I tried to make a realistic progression. A lot of people just try and play games like this for the adult content so I sorta eased some of that in but only for the sake of story building. I wanted it to feel organic and realistic the way a relationship could. It was kinda fun to take a lot of those natural situations that seem become porn cliches and make them actually have some substance to them. It's a long story so you got a long way to go and honestly i think the beginning is the worst part. I promise I get better