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Hmm... purchased this on a whim so I guess I will give a short review based upon my experience thus far since no one else has commented as of yet.

Visually, the game looks good.  I like the renders and the characters all look visually distinct from one another.  There are no animations that I can recall but there are some sporadic audio clips so that's a plus.  The story is fine as far as I can tell (having only played through the first three chapters) and it introduces us to the different characters.  There does not seem to be a main protagonist so far as each chapter has focused on jumping back and forth between characters.

The biggest negative for me atm is the amount of content... Granted, I have only played through the first half of what is currently available (3 of 6 chapters) but each chapter was VERY short.  Literally 10 minutes, then 9 minutes, and then maybe 5 or 6 for chapter 3?  And I read at a normal pace, hardly a speed reader lol.  Given the current price point (very affordable) I guess the limited amount of content is fine but still... I just wished it was longer.  When I see multiple chapters I dont expect to be able to finish them so quickly. 

Anyways, if I have to give the game a score... I would give it maybe a 6.5 out of 10 based on the three chapters I have played thus far.  Not bad, not great, less points for limited content, more points for *potential* as it is a work in progress.  Here is looking towards further updates!  Cheers.

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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed what you've played so far. 6.5... I'll take it lol. Yeah, those first few chapters were short, but I kinda wanted to keep them that way, to introduce different characters and not have it feel like too much of an overload. Chapters 4-6 do get longer. One of the things I really wanted to do with this VN was give the player a lot of different paths to explore. As of now, I believe there are about 16 different paths you could be on, and after chapter 6, those all doubled based on a couple choices at the end of the chapter. Hopefully, I've made something where 2 different people won't have the exact same playthrough. So yeah, replayability was a huge thing for me, as some of my fave VNs (GGGB, Our Red String, Leap of Faith) all have that.

Glad you liked the renders. There are a few crude animations at the beginning of the VN, and I've added more to the other chapters as well. And I've learned how to do them a bit better now, so yeah, keep an eye out for those (Try not to click too fast, as you could miss them and go right through to the next render). And I think the rendering has gotten quite a bit better, as I've learned a lot about Daz and how it works... shadows, light, effects etc.

 Chapter 7 is currently in development now (slower than I wanted, but with my work schedule, it kind of is what it is).  I've gotten almost all of the writing finalized for all 16 different paths (there were a couple parts I had to go back over and clean up due to a couple errors) and the rendering has begun, and I'm about 50 in (The render total for this should be 3-4 times that many once all is said and done). 

Thanks for your reply!  I definitely plan on finishing the remaining chapters.  Your game has a solid foundation and there is a lot of potential here.  Keep up the good work!