i really enjoyed this demo!! won't get too spoiler-y but parts of it genuinely creeped me out ;-; .. i saw you said you had dyslexia and that's the reason for the spelling mistakes, but don't worry, i could still understand what you meant while reading!! plus, you could easily get a friend or someone online to volunteer to spell-check for you for free!! anyways, i really look forward to seeing more of this game but i sincerely hope it isn't the cliched "turns out it was all the MC's mental illness" trope xD ..
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It's really hard to write with my dyslexia and sometimes the comments make me think it's unreadable so I'm glad it's somewhat understandable :b. The volunteer proof reader is a good idea, but I'd feel really bad if since I can't pay them :,). And thank you so much for enjoying my game! More creepy bits to come! (Also I have a strong dislike to the 'it was all because of the MC's mental illness trope' so don't worry ;b)
it's reassuring to hear that someone else dislikes that trope xD and don't worry, the text was fully readable and understandable to me, and didn't hinder my enjoyment at all!! i really enjoyed this demo :D!! plus, lots of people really wouldn't mind volunteering, but if you really feel guilty then maybe you can offer beta testing so they're technically getting something out of it (except it's early access to content instead of payment)?? just an idea!!