Short and sweet, I like it. I’m not much of a storytelling game person so I can’t comment much on the quality of it from that point of view, but I can relate to the premise and I think that’s neat. As for the theme, I think it fits the jam in a somewhat interesting way. Its not exactly uplifting nor lighthearted, but the whole idea is about moving on, which is sort of inherently positive (or at least is supposed to be).