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I absolutely loved this visual novel. 

I finished it up to the cliff-hanger "to be concluded." I am definitely looking forward to the reworkings of the initial chapters, including the enhanced graphics, added music and revised writing that I saw mentioned in an update. The current state of the story is... wow, damn good. I cannot accurately describe how amazing this story is. I think the greatest aspect of this game is the writing, and to me it was an excellent, introspective work. I also really liked the art and character designs even though they're (I guess) still in a rough draft form. So with the game, while playing, I actually started questioning my own self and my life choices leading up to now. Even though the story revolved around two young male characters' issues related to sexuality and authenticity, I still could relate as a mid-20s/trans-F. For instance, Zack's internalized homophobia and him hiding his true self for so long, as well as Braden's confusion on his own identity and his issue with dealing with the public's perception of him, resonated with me as someone who is beginning to question my own identity as possibly "non-binary" and who has had internalized transphobia in the past. I really liked the inclusion of Mikhail and Max (Ash), they were incredible characters who offered unique perspectives to the two main cast. Team Ash. The gradual build-up of the plot was done very well, and I felt like the sensual scenes near the end were normalized. 

So yeah! Those are a couple of my thoughts on the story, and I am just obsessed. It was so good and I will stay tuned for new updates. Rooting for you guys because I think this game needs way more recognition. What were some game/media inspirations? This game gives me Life is Strange vibes, but with more mature content.

P.S. I listened to lo-fi hip-hop while playing and it.. oddly fit the vibe. Haha.

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heya Kami, thanks for the feedback and comments.

So on the rework, the models would stay the same but I'm sure you've noticed that the beginning of the game is poorly lit and just looks crappy. The idea is to make the beginning look graphically like the ending does. The game is just me progressively getting better I think. 

I'm also glad that you were able to relate to parts of the game even though (and I just made a few comments like this in the post above) that it was sorta designed as a bro game. I wrote what I was comfortable with but a lot of existential thought and self discovery is very personal revelations but the focus or method of accepting those can be a bit more general. I'm glad it holds up to someone who has a very different orientation than I do and that it just seemed "normalized" to you. 

I appreciate the desire for the game to get more recognition. I'm pretty lowkey and don't market very well. It's also my first project and I've gotten way more out of this than I ever imagined that I would so I don't need all the attention. I'm certainly thankful for what I've gotten and continue to get. But i do hope that it finds it's way into the hands and hearts of people that could find meaning from it. 

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I find it cool how you channeled your own experiences into the game, it makes it more meaningful and intimate. And yeah, I think the writing in the game, in comparison to other male-on-male romance novels out there that I know of, is so much more personal that the reader can actually empathize with the characters. That's a great thing. It's almost like Zack and Braden actually exist in maybe an alternate universe, haha.

On a side note, is the Discord server accepting new members?

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Oh for sure, the Discord is free and always open to people. The only real limitation is that it's 18+ like the game is and we try and keep drama to a minimum. We try to be a pretty chill community that's pretty accepting of people. Pop in if you wanna say hey. I usually try and greet everyone but sometimes I got windows up working on stuff so I miss them. If you join, say hey and tag me if I miss you. We regularly interact with people.