1. It's super cute; the crayon-style and character design give the game a lot of personality. The jokes land, and I can start to see some individuality in the characters (which is hard to build since the game is short)
2. I was pleasantly surprised by the music, since I didn't know you had composed it. Give yourself a shout-out in the credits lol
3. The text boxes don't disappear between scene transitions, so I'm not able to take in the backgrounds
4. A different color, character portraits, or quick animation between speakers to differentiate dialogue would be nice
Woo! excited to see more from you!