Thank you so much for this post. It made me want to abandon everything and get to working on Season 02 right away. :) Although I can't do that of course, I need to stay consistent and finish what I've started with Queen Trainer. Don't worry though, season 02 is coming.
Also thank you on your feedback on episode 11. All those choices were fun to work on, but at the same time they extended the episode development time so I wasn't sure if it was worth it. You seem to be one of the very few people who appreciated the whole choices things to such degree. I will consider doing something similar again with the first ep of season 02.
Same here. SC34 has been new for me - the story is suprising (in a good way), the characters and skins are diverse, the fourth wall breaks in particular are hilarous and, hell, you seem to be one of the little content creators who put more effort into story than erotic scenes. I love the game. Also, if it's too much, maybe consider a collab with the guys at Silver. You know what I mean.
Thanks, man.
Personally I think my writing skills are pretty mediocre, but if you compare my stories to the rest of the western NSFW games out there, my work does look like a masterpiece. I don't know, I just try to do my best when it comes to my games. I mean, my games are not perfect but it's literally the top of my ability, if I could do better I would, trust me. I wish more game devs had that mindset. I need some good games to play :)
In any case, thank you for your feedback, bro :)
The writing of channel 34 is perfect for me. Maybe it's not perfect for visual novels in general, some of which have a more dense writing, but for a sex game like this one the unique tone of the game, the well dosed scenes, the evolving plot among others, gives the game an undeniable quality.
When you compare it with other games that are either too serious for what's going on, or too light for there to be a minimum of narrative coherence between the sex scenes, your game is way above the norm.