Wow, super polished, feels like a living a breathing world. All of the little scripted animations and reaction bubbles were great. I liked the little environmental touches, like the woman trying to fly in the garden and falling over again and again, the girl skipping over tiles, and the guys fighting in the training area.
For a 1 person team, this has a lot of content. You’re a good writer, I want to see how the story plays out, so I hope you continue the project :)