The game is very good so far! Since we only are at the very beginning of the story I don't think anything needs to be changed.
As for Torent, I really like how he looks like in his current state, I think you gave him a good balancing between rock abs and soft belly, he has defined abs but with a nice hint of softness. I'd love to see content focusing on Torent's pecs once he and the MC get closer.