Wish to leave a comment.
I'll say not only positive things, but playing this novel, I was impressed. Despite high harem potential, disgusting kinky stuff(ugh, but I know it shall have place to be!), finally not every character can be pressed just by click or willing to you-know-what-i-mean, characters are seem almost alive, having their wishes, attitudes, beliefs, and (at least supposed) motives. A good point here is choices: although nobody of taken companions dissapoint, I really respected Lorean, admired Lea, empathized Elicia and had fun with Perrin thus far. Even character of Azran(father) seems to be understandable (or I just know his type haha) as a people of Middle Age times. Sometimes reminds of The Witcher series, a good example for inspiration for myself.
Still, some moments are REALLY HAVE TO BE more convincing.
1)Scene at beginning with the wh*re. she were so loose in words I wanted to shut her mouth even playing as diplomat. she layed down with the lord(ofc not yet), after all! I even want to say I'd like to have option to avoid that scene with her.
2)After I've come to Archelm, and King gave me task, I had many questions "why?", there's many features missing, sometimes you had only one option to answer, and event is going too quick to believe it happens. I say it about task itself. (also Manfred is cool)
3)About Manfred's demand for wedding, I'd ask it shouldn't be something senseless, because at least I needed an option to talk to his daughter first to see if we fit, before decision(but of course there its not possible I get it). It looks as blind as obvious refuse for everyone who is able to think twice. I hate it, bcz Manfred is smart, but he said almost nothing noticeable about his daughter.
4)A bard Perrin, proposing his joining, have to promise something more convincing than that he will be grateful. he's a diplomat himself, after all.
5) in 5 chapter, fighting looks empty, we saw only one bandit who attacks and it ends. better to change something. And the moment another one appears with attack of werewolfs too.
6) And why they try to escape castle??? Thick walls and doors isnt enough for protection? And why they left gates open anyway? too much questions for having no answer in 5 chapter. I even wanted to ask why Elicia leaving, but I can hope she has reasons.
EDIT: third point were not so logical as I saw it first, so its not objection.