Very nice game! I have few thoughts:
- The atmosphere is great, very well achieved. The sound effects all mix together very well, and the effects of the flashlight have a unique charm. In particular, in the final area, the light gives a rich personality to the environment.
- I like the level as a whole, well connected, with the shortcut at the church, well connected.
- The particle effects in the notes are well thought, good way to make sure the player doesn't get lost
- I don't know if it's intentional, but when coming back from the police station I couldn't 'walk' through the lower section of the stairs, I had to use jump to go up (the upper section was walkable though).
- Footsteps are well done! I think you have a sound when you go over vegetation, and it really makes it feel you are stepping on a different surface.