Right out of the gate, the artstyle caries this game hard. It's incredibly charming and the lack of professionalism compliments the writings simplicity. Unfortunately that also leads to the first major complaint, while the game is rather short, it's still long enough to grow bored of the way everything is written. Ignoring the typos (as those honestly add to the charm of everything,) none of the characters speak differently from one another and often times you're stuck fawning over the cuteness of every character design but troubled over the fact that the writing makes it all seem like it's being read to you by one person. Still though, for a first attempt, you've more than blown it out of the water. Writing dialogue and especially conversations takes work that I cannot even fathom and you've already nailed the visual aspects of the game. I'm very excited to see if you have any projects to come.