I think the game starts really strong but the choices you make were a let down for me.
I was very far with Emily, almost maxed out, but still failed the points check and couldnt kiss her to progress her path properly. And that's probably because i made the wrong choice at some point in the game, but i don't even know when, the wrost part for me is the the lack of choices, there's probably 4-5 choices for chapter, sometimes i feel more like a spectator than the main character.
No hate for your work, man. I think this game has a lot of potential, i specially like the characters you created, and i cant wait to see it finished, i just hope it improves in the aspects i mentioned so i can get back to playing it. Wish you the best