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It's a good game, I see a lot of potential in it. I liked the relationship development with the characters, the relationships don't seem rushed. The graphics are nice and girl models look great. I liked the story, it's enjoyable and not very complex, but it's interesting to follow. The only significant flaw is the sex scenes, they are standard animatiot from HS2, not much dialogue, which makes the scenes look faded and not exciting, although there was the same problem at the beginning of "Once in a Lifetime" development, so I believe this will be fixed in the future, gaining experience. I've played 100+ AVNs and I see a lof of potential in this novel. I apologize for my bad english, I use a translator as my knowledge is zero.

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I’m glad to hear you like the story so far and think it has potential. I really appreciate it! And I’ll try to add more dialogue to the sex scenes in the future to make them more interesting. I did make the animations myself though but I wanted to start with some vanilla stuff first. Once the story gets further along I can start adding a lot more things!

(Your english is perfectly understandable btw, so don’t worry about that ;))