cool stuff! definitely my kinda vibe with the overall look.
I have a couple small points:
- Add an interaction prompt for the door in the cabin.
- If you jump onto the slopes at the beginning you slide really fast along them and get stuck for a second, feels like a bug with your character controller.
- the water at the beginning is super difficult to see, I would recommend having a different texture / mesh to represent the bottom of the pond so it stands out more.
keep working on this, i think you've got a solid foundation for a game. I look forward to seeing where you take this