Hello. Great game! Really enjoying it so far. I wanted to quickly touch on some grammar mistakes. The plural form of "knife" is "knives" not "knifes". "Knifes" syntax is used when using it as a verb in present tense.
For example:
- "You have a lot of knives." (noun)
- "Where are all the knives?" (noun)
- "She knifes animals for fun." (verb)
- "He knifes people in the back." (verb)
I don't mean to come across as an asshole with my message. I don't mind if English isn't your first language either. I just wanted to hopefully provide some help as I'm sure you deeply care about proofreading the game's script so it can deliver the story with full effect. I'd like to see this game do well just like you. Thank you!