Thank you for playing, and for your detailed feedback! I'm glad to hear that the story and how it was presented through the text worked for you, as that was the area I really focused on when making it. And I agree with all of the improvements you suggested. Having a visual and musical element to the game would definitely enhance the story, so I hope to add that in the next version. And the save feature...I think Ink created that automatically? If anything, that lets me know that I still have a bit to learn in Ink :)