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I think that i don't see her facial expressions enough. I think that it must be clear that she is smiling. And that curvy line on her forehead makes her look like an old bald man. I would recommend you to make her eyes more human and make her smile evily. Or a smug smile. And remove the line. And i would recommend you to make blood drip of her hands too. Overall, if you would fix this then it is pretty good. Keep going.

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Okay, I will work on her mouth and her eyes. Well, she doesn’t have hair, does she? 😅 Should I just remove the lines on her forehead and leave it blank? And when you said „remove the line“ what line did you mean? What hands? She doesn’t have hands. 😂😅

And it‘s not blood, it‘s watermelon juice, of course! 😂

Is this better?


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Yeah, it is better. Now one last problem is that it looks like she has hands ok the black backgrounds. It looks like a black  shirt lol. Try to make it seem more obvious that she doesn't have her hands. Just make blood drip of her hands or something. Everything else seems fine.

I really don’t know how much obvious I can make that she doesn’t have arms. 😅 Should I just add very little sleeves?