Viktor and Player murdering a pacifist teacher... I don’t know how to feel about this. It’s cool, but kinda rough.
I like the idea with the bridge, but I wouldn’t go with the codes to put in again. It’s boring to have mechanics twice. I think it would be better if there were two possibilities: Either you cut the ropes of the bridge in the right moment and Alice falls to her death, or you don’t cut it in the right moment and Alice will jump off the falling bridge and then climb the wall up to you.
When the second possibility happens you will have to run to the door, and you must have at least one stamina refilling item that also causes you to run infinitely for a short time, or else you will die. When Alice falls to her death, she will scream: „WHY DID YOU DO THIS?! YOU‘RE JUST LIKE THE OTHERS!!“ and when she climbs up the wall, she will scream: „DID YOU JUST TRY TO KILL ME?!“, which is your sign to run.
Viktor will always cut the ropes in the right moment. After that it would be cool if he says: „No... LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO!“ and then he speed slides at you a bit slower than Cleany, but still fast, and you also will have to run to the door. And maybe the only thing you still need for that door is a key you can only find during the final chase.