Interesting concept of a writer having a block and going away but not totally original. I think the animated scenes are fine besides needing to make the loop more smooth. They have very jarring points where you can see it start over.
I think the only thing i actually have aproblem with is over using pop culture references and way of characters talking the way they do. Just feels fake the way they talk and while people use those terms they dont use them that much
Given all that im interesed to play more when you update as at its core i like the concept