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Thank you so much for your feedback! Please let me know how the play through with your friends go. I have yet to play it through myself, hence it definitely not being the final version.

-Thank you for feedback on the spells! I was worried if the way I explained it was confused so this is especially helpful.

-About the stats, I can see your point on this. There are levels to the stats and spells, but I'm worried if I call the stats points that it may be confusing. That's because number associated with character's stats directly refers to the amount of d8 rolled. However, I do think you have a really good point. I'll change it to something else, but I'm not sure points would work.  (If I am misunderstanding you on this point, please let me know!)

-I'll definitely fix that for conditions! 

The grammar, spelling, formatting, yes I know that needs some fixing. Do you have any specific feedback for formatting that would be helpful to players? Any sections I should move around?

Again, thank you so much for your feedback Eve the Rat Monarch! I appreciate it a lot! 

-Bluu (he/they)

Nothing big stuck out about the formatting, it's just a little rough. Readable, but rough. The picture of Owlbert plopped right in the middle of the Palismans list was a little jarring though. I'm a little busy right now but I know I'll forget if I don't respond now, so I'll give it another look over when I'm free and probably edit this for anything else I notice. 

I'll keep you posted if I manage to wrangle my friends into playing, but if you need any play testers on your end I'd be more than willing to fill a spot. 

Oh okay, yeah I'll take note of that. I honestly couldn't tell  if it was jarring or charming, so that's good to know! 

I actually might need more play testers so I'll keep you in mind. I'll follow you, that way it will be easier to contact you if I need play testers! 

Alrighty, sounds like a plan. You know where to find me if you need play testers, and I'll keep you updated if I'm able to wrangle my mates into playing.