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so yeah basically the girl who wrote this fic made Character A's story equivalent the villain.

So she didn't even HAVE a choice in the matter. ...what a way to go lol

So, alright. A random made character A, the villian of this entire thing. Bratty, snobby, whatever-this character thinks she's all that and every man is just gonna fall for her, what after that? As well, we really only have character's A side of the whole thing-

Hawks <34 years ago

yeah no so basically Character A canonically in Random's story is yeah-bratty, vain, selfish, a jackass, etc. Character A in real life is literally none of those things and so when she gets transported into the story it's like "Wait is this how this person sees me cuz like I've never done-ANY of these things."

The reason WHY she's the villain in this story is that Character A is pretty, and fairly talented like she does sport-shit and stuff like that. So she's moderately well-liked in school and "Popular"...but obviously people aren't one dimensional so no, she's not a catty, slutty, condescending bitch she's just-a PERSON.

🍄Kèlspherè 🍄(O n l i n e)4 years ago

...OHHHH-

OHhhhh, I thought you meant like she LITERALLY takes her place, like sudden mood change, and just-Oookay,

Okay, yeah NOW I get it, sorry. was a LIL confused there!

Hawks <34 years ago

jesus no that'd be crazy-

but basically the longer she's in there the more the story gets changed and the more the person writing it tries to fix it/gets upset.

🍄Kèlspherè 🍄(O n l i n e)4 years ago

Okay yeah why did i think that-

And huh, so even after wards, somehow the story is changing, even though the 'writer' is trying to fix it?...That part does confuse me a little, but eh.

Hawks <34 years ago

no so like- Character A's actions don't really align with what random's writing out.

🍄Kèlspherè 🍄(O n l i n e)4 years ago

Yeah i mean that's, what I mean. Like if their writing it, it just kinda confuses me how the actions turn out, when metaphorically, she's still writing.

Hawks <34 years ago

so basically character A isn't bound to the writing because-she ISN'T written. So yeah, random can write actions for her, buttt that doesn't nessecarily mean she'll do them.

🍄Kèlspherè 🍄(O n l i n e)4 years ago

Oh, ohhhh-okay, sorry. Alright so while EVEN IF, she writes her actions, she can, or in this case, just never does the actions-

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