Nice game. You wrote good sentences in hypnosis theme that felt natural. The game has great potential and many sandbox actions with that girl. It took around 25 mins for me to see all the plot. For next updates, there may be more actions, new characters, and options to replay some scenes. I can’t call it bad, but the beginning felt too quick. I mean the mc acted so experienced in mind control like he did it many times before. And his behavior also felt like this. Too rapid transition from ordinary human to magic user. So good luck in creating the game!