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Art style is great, I love it! However I don’t understand those see-through clothes coming out of nowhere. I don’t understand either why are so much of the pics while doesn’t really happen anything. An animation would be nice instead or just a simple blackout. Is it really important to see those pics? Less nudity is more sometimes.

So far Olivia have picked those clothes. So it wasn't Emma's choice. And she went with what her friend wanted, thinking it was cool and hot. Since she got attention from Robert at the beach. She liked it and wanted to relax her mind, to feel free. 

I think it's important to build up something, I guess that's why I keep all those images. Like life is a lot of "non-action". I know this isn't life, but there you have my thoughts. 

Thanks for the comment! 

And about animations. 

That's a good idea and I've started to incorporate them as an alternative to capturing a "mood" or "feeling" in a scene. 

Thank you for your reply! Well, I thought Olivia’s picks were just rude and Emma is so brutally naïve or has no shame at all. Robert is okay, Olivia too, but I don’t know, I expected from Emma a “no way” answer for those see-through clothes no matter if she likes it or not. Even Olivia doesn’t wear them. However it’s your story, I wonder how will you make it. :D

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Thanks buddy!

I really do appreciate it. It helps the story to grow and the characters, more alive.

No problem. At the age of 18 years – as I remember she is that old – people are mostly trying new ways of their sexuality, but they are still kind of childs. They are doing what they want to, but that’s new. Emma seems to be an exchibitionist, so she lived 1-3 years in a thrill, biting her finger to show herself. This is her chance, but the what would the world say? She needs support, and knowing she won’t go to jail for indecent exposure. Not wearing lingerie under her clothes, or bra with see-through clothes just how you made it, that’s a safe way to live her own kink. And of course hiding things from players is just a way to make them insterested. :D

One more thing which has SPOILER!:

Does that guy have any reason to strip her down and leave or doesn’t? A revenge is okay, but how did he knew she will be there? Or is he just a pervert? He should be absolutely sure nobody see him. There sould be always reasons and thoughts behind acts.

I agree with you about 100%. 

More is less, most times, I feel. If it has a purpose, it is good. But I don't want it to complicated either. 

And if it seem to be a random act of weirdness - that should be clear to the viewer. 

Thanks!