I think this was a game with a lot of potential, but it falls short because of two things in my opinion
1. In so many instances it tells us characters do things rather than showing. For instance it'll say " they had a long conversation that went into the night where they grew closer as friends" but we never actually get to see that conversation. I'm not saying everything is handled this way, but it happens so often especially near the beginning of the game that it was a challenge to honestly get invested. I almost left before it got to something good.
2. The sex scenes were....less than appealing. I get that the art style is the art style. But the way they were illustrated...it didn't look sexy, actually a lot of the sex scenes visually looked less than attractive. I can forgive the soft and respectful way they refer to dicks or butts, even though it got old after a while, but the actual images made the characters (characters I thought looked sexy and nice) suddenly look oily and uncomfortably placed.
With that being said, I think the amount of choices available in this game was awesome. Characters actually got some good development even if it took time to happen. And there was a bet of suspense and tension I enjoyed. There's a lot here to love, but those two things I pointed out are holding me back from that. I'd give this game a 5 out of 5. it could have been extra special but too many short cuts taken in the writing, and the porn parts left too much to be desired.