Thank you for your interest in NeveN, we really appreciate the feedback!
You should like the next build as well, since we intend to always improve on the storytelling and dialogues while fixing the problems you talk about here. There will be more characters and more sprites, and the problems of the first build will be fixed as well. Akhet's sprite will be aligned and the sprites in general will appear differently so that the whole thing will be easier on the eye.
Thanks again for the kind words, and we hope you will have as much fun to read as we have to write this story!