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Review so far - update 0.2.3 (Spoilers a little)
So far this game is AMAZING.

The story 9/10 - The story so far is really interesting. I always read the bed time and humiliation talks after word because they are really interesting and give a lot of information about the characters. The Third person Omniscient view point is probably the best thing that makes the dialogue interesting. The story of the goddess and demon kings and The things that must be done according to the goddess is an incredible part of the story-line.

Character's 10/10 - Character's are so good that I remembered all the names by heart. The design's and pixel art is incredible animations are smooth and the detail's are outstanding.

MARS - Amazing MC, Smart, knows how to plays his cards, but also is kinda torn between actually helping or just doing his role as during some scene's he generally feels bad. (Hopefully in future endings and choices he might turn good or something)

ERIN - His character is perfect for his role of.. well getting cucked. He's stuck up and has desire's that he cannot get because of his role as the Hero. He's selfish, ignorant, and only cares for Cecile.

Cecile - Amazing design of course. Made to be very attractive to the viewer's, and her design also plays roles in the game and story such as her Priestess outfit and her insecurities with her body. She's a character that has a lot of pride but swallows it for the sake of her destiny. This allows our task (Mars) to be easier and also develops character development from pure to what she will eventually turn into.

SERA - Hides emotions and is afraid to show them because of her fear of looking weak in front of Erin. This leads to amazing character development. Her passion to be with Erin is what makes her keep going even through all the shit we (Mars) puts her through.

Vi - Great companion, always has our (Mars) back and genuinely loves Mars.

Lavinia - Good side character, the dates let us see a lot more of her and see her views on the world. In the future will probably join the 2 girls.

Music (10/10) - Surprisingly really good. I usually mute game music cause they are not really good and kinda annoying. The soundtracks are like some undertale type music lol it's just really good (IMO)

Bugs ( or shit i just did wrong)

1. There is a bug where when you hit the heart icon to see the sepal stats of Cecile there is no way to exit. I had to restart cause of it but just don't click it and double save just in-case.

2. There is sometimes after fighting where a monster will appear on the screen and will stop you from doing anything but accessing the menu.

Things to think about adding. -

1. More monster design's - At least 3 different monster design's

2. More attack animations or attacks in general

3.  More dialogue with Vi I kinda feel bad leaving her out the picture.

Overall - 9/10 game

Game was amazing keep it up!

(+1)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

I'm definitely going to add all the stuff you mentioned, it's just a matter of priority.

Thanks again and I hope you play the next update!