You know what, I'll take it.
Out of curiosity, though, what makes you feel like Golems aren't a good fit for Monsterhearts? And what do you feel that I got right that the other homebrews you've seen were missing?
It's the focus on being a teenager/relationships. From what I understand -- and I'm not an expert by any means, very new to being observant -- the golem isn't really a... person? Well, they are, but not in the teenaged way. Closer to Baymax from Big Hero Six, or, hell, Superman, if you focus on the superhuman strength, the protecting, as well as the investigative journalism as Clark Kent, since golems are as much investigators as they are physical protectors. They're a response to blood libel-- accusations that the Jewish people are doing human sacrifice of good Christian children-- and part of that means being a physical boundary between us and those who seek to persecute, but another, equally important part, is finding the true perpetrators of the crimes. That dual purpose is why I think they'd be a better fit for a game like Monster of the Week.
It's less that you had something the others were missing as much as you had the wisdom to take out the sex move and not make it a weird BDSM thing. If this sounds like the bar is literally on the floor... yeah. Yeah, it kind of is.
Totally valid critique.
I grew up with the golem as a bedtime story, and those stories tended to focus more on the guardian aspect than the investigator aspect. So for me, the iconic depiction of the golem is "indestructible protector of the powerless". The PC who inspired this Skin was a golem who skewed so far towards guardian that his guiding philosophy was "every life is precious except for mine".
That said, "golem as investigator" is definitely a core element of the folklore, and I would absolutely *love* to see someone create a MotW or Urban Shadows playbook that explored that angle.
And, yeah, for a Skin whose sense of self and ability to consent are so heavily compromised, I would have felt *really* uncomfortable including a Sex Move.