Yes, it is the consequence of starting with zero experience as a writer. At the moment I am nowhere near being a good writer but I have gained experience and knowledge in writing in both English and Spanish. It was time to rework the intro.
As for the plot... I still have a lot of things in store that will happen step by step and even more so now that I've got up to speed with the Blade & Soul plot since it's a source of inspiration for me in everything related to lust/Vanessa. Soon we'll see new things about the plot, main and secondary girls, some RPG features I have in mind... There's still a long way to go.