Caleb's path was beautiful; it held a lot of emotion and heart. I love how you introduced the backstory, kept his personalty, and yet at the same time managed to further the main character. Speaking of main character, I felt as though I could feel what they were... the artfully drawn scenes were a nice touch.
Orion's path... well what can I say? The first time I played I fell in love with this crazy bastard and now? Now, I'm obsessed with this game.
Often times when someone has a nice story their art suffers and visa-versa. This one was exquisite both in art and in stories. For the well managed balance you've earned a follower. Great Job!!!