Just a suggestion and I dont want you guys to think I'm a total creep lol, but could you perhaps think about adding a part to the story where the little girl actually turns out to be my daughter and maybe there is drama there and they end up having to stay with me, I know it's super weird but I really hate that she was just introduced I feel like I want to have like a daughter although if its gonna be super weird having her there with that many women nvm, although if your thinking maybe the guy finds out and kicks them out then they come to me maybe that'll work. I don't know I just want this book to g on for a long time lol this is probably the best or one of the best vn I've ever read so I dont want it to end this quick. Nice game though I'm definitely donating also sorry I should mention that the domination part is kinda weird maybe. I dont think I could ever do that to any of the women in this so if you dont mind I'd like you to add a total a hole in there maybe someone trying to mess with the company, (or not it sounds super weird now that I'm reading it over lol😋🤣)