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Foxpancakes3 years ago (2 edits) (+2)

Didn't want to read and run so here are my thoughts after playing.

I enjoyed the demo! I really want to see what happens next so was bummed when it ended at an interesting part.

Spoiler: Liev really scared me with his sudden change in personality.

My only criticism is I would have liked to see the events that are summarised at the start instead of just being told about them. It would be good to see what Liev is like at school around other people too. But we just get told what he's like and don't even see him till we go on a date with him.

Liev is really cute btw. I love his design and it's mostly why I decided to play.

Great work! I look forward to playing the full version.

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Lucia Lily3 years ago(+1)

Hi! I'm glad you decided to comment, it's much appreciated!

Thank you for playing! And I'm sorry to end it on such a huge cliffhanger, haha. 

And *SPOILER WARNING!*: Yeah, I scared myself when drawing some of his more... intense expressions, so I understand how you feel very well...

Thank you for the feedback! I understand that I was 'telling' during the intro rather than 'showing'. I chose to summarise the events leading up to the main story as I didn't want to make the intro drag on for too long and risk making MC seem self-pitying/self-absorbed. 

And as for Liev, I chose to describe him like that as I wanted to make him seem like some sort of legendary 'idol' that people (including MC) don't really know much about. A lot of what MC says in the beginning is based on how they've seen him act in a public setting, and until the day of their date MC has been much too nervous to talk to him on their own.

Thank you! I'm glad you like Liev and his design <3

And thank you for playing my game! 

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Foxpancakes3 years ago (1 edit) (+1)

You did a really great job drawing all his different expressions!

That makes sense that you didn't want the intro to drag on too long and for Liev to seem more mysterious (as in the player/MC not knowing much about him.) It does work and isn't an issue. I was just being nit picky I think. Telling rather than showing does work well in some cases. :)

No worries! I look forward to the full game or any updates you put out! You are talented and I really like your art style. :D

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