Not too bad for a start, I found the character introduction sweet and the general story appealing,
If the second part of the prologue is implemented really well, it can be a really nice start very well done o/
Update normally it was planned to release full chapters but since we wanted feedback we splitted the prologue in half to already correct our game mistakes so that it's already polished when the Prologue is finished. So that means after the Prologue part 2 its basicly finsihed with the Prologue and the game starts with Chapter 1 and so on and it will be always an update