I might actually just start from scratch-, because like now i actually "have" lore to use. Before it wasn't really sticking with the actual thing, more like just different things.
Heh, well I'll try I'll try. Actually, do you wanna help give me a few ideas? I mean like, apart from the things that was in the others, i mean sure, it wasn't exactly with the lore, but still, i don't wanna just make a almost exact chapter!