First off, this is a pretty cool game. I really like the different paths and characters, however there are some issues(mostly minor) that really bug me.
The House Party: aside from the pointless mini games, it's the option to Drink More that doesn't make sense. It goes nowhere. No matter how much she drinks, the outcome is the same. Why even have the option?
The Montages: we see her becoming more confidant and self assured, only to have her go back to being shy and timid when the story resumes.
The Club, this is only here, because we see what happens when she drinks too much it just makes the option at the house party make even less sense.
The Runaway Bride: I did not like this update, I tried to , but I just couldn't get into it. It felt forced and like you were trying to hard to do a Bridesmaids/ Bad Moms type scenario, with an out of nowhere sex scene that doesn't fit the character; on any path.
Overall I enjoy the game, but I would like to see a little more consistency with the character. I look forward to the next update.