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The game is pretty okay and the story quite good (even if it's too slow for me), but PLEASE make an effort on the English !!! There are so many typos and even grammatical errors it's painful to read sometimes >_< (I'm not a native speaker but the errors are not even high-school level).

I personally prefer slower updates but with quality, this bad English nearly makes me want to drop the game. Too bad because otherwise the job is pretty good overall.

EDIT : went to the end but I drop the game, the text is really shitty quality now, Google trad do a better job.

dean92112 years ago(+1)(-2)

Im from Germany and havent learned English in a Native Way but i dont know what your Problem is.

Its probably your Second Visual Novel , i find the Writing very good and the English is always understandable and Contains no Misspelling or Gramatical Errors.

JaddN72 years ago (1 edit)

Play games like Halfway house, Esteria, My New Memories, Price of Power or Eternum and you will see what good English really is.
For Dark Magic the first half is okay but after that the text quality becomes more bad with every scene. Anyone can objectively sees that.

And no, as you can see it's not my second visual novel, I've done enough, independent ones like dark magic and more professional ones like those you can find on Mangagamer.

But hey, if you enjoy that level of English and it doesn't break your immersion good for you. Personally I prefer to play better quality games, that's all.

dean92112 years ago(-1)

Maybe its just the Writing Style?

Ive also played Halfway House , My new Memories and Eternum and i dont see any differences in the Quality of Writing , just the Style.

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