Hey Ben,
I am a regular player of the game and I've noticed some major bugs in the story:
1. In season 1, while playing from the beginning without choosing a particular chapter, Ben never goes to Dragan to deliver tools. Hence, he never knows how to help Jeffery and never has the scenes with Klarion's and Galazar's introduction. While playing from the beginning, Jeffery disappears for sometime and is found directly sucking kalrion's cock, in the scene after Conrad and Jeffery fuck.
2. Make sure the map choices are given again to the player. For example, when I have a choice to select a place in the map, make sure that the game comes back to the place where I can make the selection. So that I can directly explore other story lines. This is because, when I play lineraly just doing a series of choices, i am getting information from many different paths that I never was able to explore because I had chosen a different option. Therefore, force the player to play each choice for the whole story to make sense.
For the problem in 1) when I play chapter by chapter instead of the whole season, I have all the scenes. When direct play is done, lots of important scenes are cut. And this cut startes from the Dragan shop sex scene.
Please take time to read this and correct it, these are major errors in the storyline that destroy the game.
Cheers