I'm not sure if this project is still active and thus whether posting a comment is just me shouting into the void, but I (finally) played the demo and figured eh, why not?
+ The art is amazing, not just the character art but the backgrounds as well. I loved the spider lilies in the Blood God's... lair?
+ The humor is genuinely funny, including the more subtle bits like the literally-just-born MC not knowing anything about the butler cafe (or, indeed, social interaction) or the MC pitying Lucifine for living in a junkyard.
+ Non-humor writing is also really good, particularly in the descriptions of the MC gaining consciousness and of the town; I'm looking forward to seeing more of it since the demo was mostly humorous.
+ Characters are immediately distinct and spark interest in interacting with them more.
? Is the MC gender-neutral? I'm cool if that's the case, it's not necessary to specify male/female/etc especially considering the MC is a newly-formed... homunculus?
* At first I thought it was some kind of Warhammer 40K parody game and a part of me is still mildly disappointed that it isn't.
+ Lucifine best boy
* PUNCH HIM HARDER